I love the idea that you had but I believe that you did not portray it well. Your graphic is the wrong format. You should've got rid of the background of your picture and the referee pictures. Also the text is kind of weird because green on green does not match. I think you should change your text color to black or white. Good job!
THIS IS REAAALLY creative. It's really easy to read your poem, and even the the color of the letters are green like the grass, it's still readable and understandable SO IT'S FINE. The addition pictures that you added on the picture helped our your graphic card to making it resemble your poem even more. Your pictures, letters, and whole graphic overall is very clear. AND your title by your picture really pointed out that you are a "touchdown". NICE JOB.
I love the idea that you had but I believe that you did not portray it well. Your graphic is the wrong format. You should've got rid of the background of your picture and the referee pictures. Also the text is kind of weird because green on green does not match. I think you should change your text color to black or white. Good job!
ReplyDeleteTHIS IS REAAALLY creative. It's really easy to read your poem, and even the the color of the letters are green like the grass, it's still readable and understandable SO IT'S FINE. The addition pictures that you added on the picture helped our your graphic card to making it resemble your poem even more. Your pictures, letters, and whole graphic overall is very clear. AND your title by your picture really pointed out that you are a "touchdown". NICE JOB.
ReplyDeleteoh and your format for the graphic is wrong btw.
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