Monday, November 21, 2016

College final

   Stanford University 

“What matters to you, and why?” 

    What matters to me is my family, they mean the world to me. The support I get from them is very high and they motivate me every day. They strive me with my sports, school, and at home. What matters to me is my football coaches. Because they motivate me to come a better man and to become a better person in life so I can come succsessful. My coaches tell me how life will go and how I should get better every day. They tell me to catch the ball every day. I want to come to a better person because not everybody in life can go to college. Not everyone can become successful. I want to separate myself from everyone who is on the same page as me as size, academics, skill, and try to push myself to outwork them and to become better than them.


     Mentality is the word that comes to my mind when I play football. It gives me a motivation that no one else has. It tells me that whatever my body can't do my mind will. My mentality tells matters because that's what everyone has. We all have a type of mentality that no one knows. Our mind is something that no one can get into. If someone's mind is thinking negative I have to think positive. If my opponent is negative from the start, I know I've already won. I know that when I'm working out with my team and my coach tells us we have to do more than the usual I will go more than the usual because it's what my mind tells me .

My effort matters to me because its something no one can judge, effort brings me to a level that I never been to. My effort describes me because I try to push my self everytime, I may make some mistakes but I will learn from it. My effort strides me to go another mile, to write another essay, to do all of my chores every day. Effort tells me how I will become a better man.

My coaches motivate me to go another round. They get in my head to help me get better or to tell me I have to pick it up.  Football matters a lot to me because it can take me a long way in college and it can take me to a whole nother level. My mentality and my effort will take me on a journey to college and to a successful life

Wednesday, November 16, 2016

Utah state university

 I would like to apply here because the accept rate is a 97%. The community is very settle. The education there is not much different than the others but i think the people around me can make a change.

Oregon State University

The acceptance rate is 77% and I think the people in the school can help me when i need help and i don't have to worry about any body that i shouldn't be around with. I feel like the teachers will give me respect as much as i respect them. The only thing i need to stress about is the tuition

Arkansas

The accept rate is 72% but i think i can make it because the amount of people in the college is less because of the environment. I really don't care about how the school looks i only care about how good the education is to get me a better life, And i really think this is a good college for me

Portland.
I want to go here because I feel like this college is closer to hawaii than the other colleges because i just like being close to Hawaii and not far away. The campus is really nice and i like how the teachers respect us and the people around me will be nice

Stanford University 

“What matters to you, and why?” 
Stanford left the essay open to interpretation for the scholars applying to the university, which is considered to be one of the most prestigious in the United States and the world.

 University of Notre Dame 

“By the end of the college application process, you will have probably written dozens of essays and responded to a multitude of questions. Use this opportunity to try something new.” 
If you want to become one of the 8,000 undergraduates who identify as the Fighting Irish, you’ll need to plan and strategize to impress admissions officials at this private Catholic research university.

Wake Forest University

“Some say social media is superficial, with no room for expressing deep or complex ideas. We challenge you to defy these skeptics by describing yourself as fully and accurately as possible in the 140-character limit of a tweet.” 
“Give us your top ten list.” 
Wake Forest is a private university with its main campus located in Winston Salem, NC. The original location was in Wake Forest, hence the name. What would be on our top ten list? How about these school facts? The school has 93 percent retention rate and an 85 percent four-year graduation rate – not bad!

Monday, November 7, 2016

Creative writing

My Partner is: Chaysen 


I am in Jihad I support my country and I don't like this place. I don't like how i am treated and i don't like how this place is made. I wish i had a home like all the rich people in the other countries. I don't like living in a house that is just a square and made of bricks with insects, bugs, and more. All i hear everyday is bombs everyday and I dont think i have a choice but to respect my country and fight for my people.


I am huge and muscular and I want to tell you that when you get huge and muscular you can be a champion. I look up to God all the time when i get rewarded because i give all my honor and glory to him. All i know is that pain is temporary and Victory is forever. And i am finally successful. I look up at the sky with all the confetti falling on me. Thanking my family and all my teammates for making me a mvp. I want to thank my YMCA gym for making me have big muscles. I want to continue my journey and help other students become good.